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Fields of lavender
slow dancing with the west wind
What a peaceful sight
:iconsaykha:
There's nothing more relaxing than the image of a lavender field, peacefully swaying to and fro in the wind. The thought of such a scene was so nice, I decided to wright a Haiku about it :heart: I hope you like it.
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~tommyboywood May 10, 2013  Professional Writer
beautiful haiku - even better with a a lavender field preview pic!
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*fotomademoiselle Jan 7, 2013  Student Photographer
Lovely. :meow:
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~birduncaged Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I actually felt quite calm reading it:D Nice
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Mood: Pleased *Mabogunje Oct 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This caught my attention when I stopped by your page. It was a moment of peace. An instant serenity. Quite well done in its simplicity.
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~ShiningSteel Oct 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
The visuals I get in my head in this are amazing. This is one of the best haiku I ever read! :heart:
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~saykha Oct 22, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you so much :hug: That really means a lot to me.
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*moyanII Oct 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
the scenario is apparently peaceful by the description of lavender field alone. so the last line can be replaced by more information, i.e. a juxtaposition of another image for comparison and to deepen the meaning of the haiku.

btw, you might also like to check out some of the resources on haiku listed on the first page of #the-haiku-club. The 5-7-5 syllables restriction is mainly for haiku written in japanese, there are more to this form of poetry when you choose to convey this form in english.
for a starter you might like to read this article to know the original form and intention of haiku:
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~saykha Oct 15, 2012  Student Writer
Oh thank you - I'll have a look at these :hug: Thank you for your help
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~BelaRoseWolf Oct 9, 2012  Student Writer
This is maybe even a little too peaceful... Hm... Great work, though!
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:iconstarell:
how such simplicity can evoke such majesty.
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