literature

Kingdom of Heaven

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Well, how are things in Heaven
where your tears are wiped away
How does it feel with your joyous smile
where the lights dance around and play

How does it feel to see Him
where His source makes rivers sow
How does it feel to have no death
not to feel its rotting flow

How does it feel to be alive in death
to be perfect in all your ways
To inhale His passion with your very breath
in His arms beyond all days

How does it feel to not be here
many following the siren's call
Where children yearn in the streets for love
chasing tears as they brace to fall
This is for #Live-Love-Write's prompt :pointr: [link]

We had to write a piece of writing starting with the first line "Well, how are things in Heaven?" and this is what I wrote.

Please let me know what you guys think :heart:

:bulletred: This is #1 on ~OblivionDrgn6's 100 Themes Challenge :pointr: [link]
See my progress here :pointr: [link]
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CinderellasPearls's avatar
May God be with you and bless your writting. I've only seen two of your poems (including this one) and I can already tell that you're talented and creative. again God Bless